Sweet thoughts
of u r passing
thru my mind:
leaving traces of
‘mmm’ in my
thoughts & a
dirty smile on
my lips. I want 2
repeat the
things that we
did. The sounds,
the positions,
the tastes. 2
relive the joys
of ur body –
sweet, horny,
wild. I want 2
trace every inch
of u with my
tongue: 2 prove
these delicious
thoughts r more
than a sweet
fiction I have
invented 2 occupy
my mind. Sight,
sound, taste. I
want every inch
of u so
desperately, I
would pay!
of u r passing
thru my mind:
leaving traces of
‘mmm’ in my
thoughts & a
dirty smile on
my lips. I want 2
repeat the
things that we
did. The sounds,
the positions,
the tastes. 2
relive the joys
of ur body –
sweet, horny,
wild. I want 2
trace every inch
of u with my
tongue: 2 prove
these delicious
thoughts r more
than a sweet
fiction I have
invented 2 occupy
my mind. Sight,
sound, taste. I
want every inch
of u so
desperately, I
would pay!
afterwords
This may well be the most imaginative and suggestive text message I have ever sent. :D
SO TELL ME: What do you think of this piece?
- Did it engage you?
- Does the meaning come across? Are there any images or lines you don’t understand or find unclear?
- Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar?
- Do you have any suggestions for revision?
Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.
Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.
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AUTHOR: I am might war. I have a love of music, the written word, travel, Anime, polar bears, people and “sticking and colouring”.
Filed under: Poetry Tagged: Desire, Lovers, NaPoWriMo, Relationships, Sex, tribute
